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winter footnotes
e.bojnowski

your elbows were anchors
in a softly-lit parking lot,
where you sang to glass and paper:

and your visions are quiet hills
your visions are shy sounds
your visions are sheep covered in frost.

speaking
loose tongued,
like an old shoe-

that dry rasp
that leaves me covered in skin flakes,
leaves me
brushed onto the wall .

I am the raised bumps in spackle-
ripped off with the sound of a poor phonograph:

in my chain link home,
a residual ghost.
:icone-bojnowski:
update June 2,2010
first place???!?!?!?!?
[link]



this hurt really badly to type.
sorry if I have been inattentive-
my neck is injured and I can't sit at the computer for long.
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Given 2010-06-13
winter footnotes by ~e-bojnowski. ( Featured by `fllnthblnk )
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~projectilewordvomit Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery in this is lovely... you could almost paint it.
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:iconvermilion--vermouth:
Beautifully written. Congratulations on the DD! *So late* :)
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:icone-bojnowski:
thank you very much!
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:iconfossilfuels:
this is incredible, wow
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:iconghrey:
~Ghrey Jun 14, 2010  Student Writer
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so so glad for you
i do love this one

"and your visions are quiet hills
your visions are shy sounds
your visions are sheep covered in frost.
:heart:
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~AnnaCecile Jun 14, 2010  Professional Photographer
You have wonderful imagery and a masterful way of punctuating. Congratulations on winning first place.
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:icononeofthose-rachels:
This is beautiful.
in my chain link home,
a residual ghost.


There's something captivating about your style -- it feels like looking between the lines and finding something precious and startling in the shadows underneath.
It's gorgeous. I had to feature you here: [link]
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