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cliff
e.bojnowski

on velvet roads,
I impale a  belated dawn
with my incisors and
shiver with perfect leaves-

I have no qualms
with the dark hills
that slope
and stagger into
a bed of scorched fly husks:

where
the thrum of the ground
melds
with the rapids in
my clairvoyant ears.
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Given 2013-01-28
~e-bojnowski needs only 48 words to paint a vivid picture in cliff. ( Suggested by `cybergranny and Featured by ^neurotype )
:iconnawkaman:
very beautiful imagery. well deserved DD :)
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~Patrikia-Bear Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't see it :(
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:icone-bojnowski:
I am not sure why you wouldn't be able to see it...try again.
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~Patrikia-Bear Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I did. Very nice job!
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:icontheonewholovestoeat:
The "incisors" part made me think of The Magician's Nephew when Aslan creates Narnia... this poem gives me warm feelings (the mushy kind).
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:icone-bojnowski:
thank you for reading.
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
=LadyofGaerdon Jan 28, 2013  Professional Writer
...wow. Congratulations on your DD!
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:icone-bojnowski:
thank you for taking the time to read my work.
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=LadyofGaerdon Jan 28, 2013  Professional Writer
You are most welcome. :)
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